Friday, August 29, 2014

Passion learning

This week we have started passion learning. Passion learning is when you have some time to learning about what you are passionate about. In my group #fashion swagga Is Mihi, J.J, Janita and I. We are doing trash to fashion. I think we did well describing our plan and we need to work on working together.The thing i'm looking forward to is making our costume and presenting it .If you want to see more information flick through this presentation.
 

Friday, August 22, 2014

Whaea Ariana

We had a lovely student teacher Whaea Ariana and she left us last week. She was a nice teacher and very kind.  Love you Whaea Ariana miss you . . .

Wednesday, August 20, 2014

My DLO

This week we have been doing our DLO (Digital learning object) in mine I did using place value to solve multiplication. Next time I think I need to speak clearly and the thing I did well is showing my working out.  

Friday, August 1, 2014

show don't tell



WILF
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking

I will leave the audience hanging

WALT show not tell in our writing

I think i did well on doing showing the emotion and not telling

next time I think I need to use more descriptive words

In class we have been doing narrative writing and we were forcing on showing not telling . . .


Her mouth watered as she gassed at the site of all the colourful present.

Her eye started to grow and her blood rushed around her body, as she boosted up to them getting ready to rip them apart, like shards of rainbows fly around. She rip them up without caring about the card she gasped . . .





Do you know what the emotion is? comment down below