Friday, June 27, 2014

Animate - The mysterious door

last week we wrote a story about a little white door (this is what the picture looks like) then we had to  show it but it had to be animated.

My story is about a little girl come home from school. She noticed a little door. Next to the door was a potion and she drinks it. Then she shrinks. Then she realise that she can fit in the door now, so she goes in. It was pitch black and after that it was a mystery. She was never to be seen again. 

Next time I think I should use more descriptive words.

I think I did good no my animated story.   

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