Thursday, April 3, 2014

The important thing about Family


WALT add detail to our writing to make its more interesting
Success Criteria - Have you remembered to
add 3 really great details
use describing words (adjectives)
start sentences with capital letters and end with full stops
re-read it to make sure it makes sense!


The most important thing about family

is that they’re always there for you

and they're kind and loving

and you can always count on them

and they always fill your heart with joy

But the most important thing about family

is that they’re always there for you.

4 comments:

  1. What great ideas you have shared about what the most important thing is about family. You are so right family are always there for YOU! :-)

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  2. That is so sweet Waimarama .I think that is what family is for to.I think you just need to remember your capital letters.

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  3. That is very nice that you think about your family like that wai.

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  4. I think that you should take some of the and's out.

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