Friday, November 14, 2014

Passion lerning

In our class we have been doing passion learning (if you want to see our plan look down below) our group is about turning trash as in like new paper and tin bottles into and fashionable accessory . My dresses  name was tropical fruit. I need to work on working with my term mate better and the thing I was most proud of presenting my work.

Tuesday, October 14, 2014

My holiday

With Miss Wallace We were writing a recount of our holiday


"Weeeeee" I screamed as I went down the flying fox. "BAAM" I banged into the platform, then I slowly unhooked the hook and dragged it along the wire. "oooooh" I took a deep breath in and stepped on to the next platform. I jumped into the net and then suddenly . . . 

Friday, August 29, 2014

Passion learning

This week we have started passion learning. Passion learning is when you have some time to learning about what you are passionate about. In my group #fashion swagga Is Mihi, J.J, Janita and I. We are doing trash to fashion. I think we did well describing our plan and we need to work on working together.The thing i'm looking forward to is making our costume and presenting it .If you want to see more information flick through this presentation.
 

Friday, August 22, 2014

Whaea Ariana

We had a lovely student teacher Whaea Ariana and she left us last week. She was a nice teacher and very kind.  Love you Whaea Ariana miss you . . .

Wednesday, August 20, 2014

My DLO

This week we have been doing our DLO (Digital learning object) in mine I did using place value to solve multiplication. Next time I think I need to speak clearly and the thing I did well is showing my working out.  

Friday, August 1, 2014

show don't tell



WILF
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking

I will leave the audience hanging

WALT show not tell in our writing

I think i did well on doing showing the emotion and not telling

next time I think I need to use more descriptive words

In class we have been doing narrative writing and we were forcing on showing not telling . . .


Her mouth watered as she gassed at the site of all the colourful present.

Her eye started to grow and her blood rushed around her body, as she boosted up to them getting ready to rip them apart, like shards of rainbows fly around. She rip them up without caring about the card she gasped . . .





Do you know what the emotion is? comment down below

Friday, July 25, 2014

Mana Whenua

at school  we have been doing an ad about the Mana whenua of our school.
Kiana, Journey and I did one about all the good things that we do in your school.
Next time I think we need to add more information and we did well by all the good adding all the coo picture




Our Hurt-free ad from Room 17 on Vimeo.

Thursday, July 3, 2014

show don't tell

In class we  have been writing about a time when you where hiding. We were working on using descriptive word's and using punctuation properly and show do tell

next time I think I need to use my punctuation better 

and I did go on doing show don't tell


WALT Describe hiding without telling the audience that we are hiding
Create our writing to make it interesting to our reader

Success Criteria

- use descriptive detail
- starts with something that was said or thought (Hook the reader in)
- use expressive vocabulary
- making sure you are showing the story instead of telling the story


- use punctuation to make sense of the story


“ I hope I don’t get caught, I don’t want to be in” I whispered to myself as I sat there in the closet all cramped up. Suddenly I heard loud footsteps like a giant going for a walk. I open the door as small as could be and behind me was a small glimpse of light.

I peeped out of the door. She was standing right there, right in front like a statue standing still. Listening for noise. So I took deep breath in for as long as I could . My mind went blank and all I was thinking of was “be quiet be quiet don’t make a noise don’t make a noise”.  

“Come on Waimarama I know you want to give up, just hold it in you can do it”  I thought to myself like a hunched over old lady with a really achy back.  I was so desperate to give up. I could smell the fatty chicken sizzling away.  

“Ohhhh My tummy starting to rumble” I muttered to  myself ready to just boost it out of the closet and munch that chicken down. Moments later I heard my sister say “I found you I found you”. Once I heard she said that, I boosted it out of the closet and skipped down the hall with a huge grin on my face I uttered down the hall “ I win, you lose I win you lose ”.

“Shame you lose” I screamed in my brothers face. I hustled outside to the front deck singing “ I am the champion and you  are a loser hahahaha, thank you thank you”.
“ I hope I don’t get caught, I don’t want to be in” I whispered to myself as I sat there in the closet all cramped up. Suddenly I heard loud footsteps like a giant going for a walk.

Monday, June 30, 2014

Remember that time

Once I came home from school I was sitting there watching T V and I was bored so I wrote some poems about the seasons of the year and this is what I wrote...

next time I think I need to change the colour of the text
and the thing I did best is probably describing words...


My banner creator

in my free time I found a website and you can animate a peace of text here mine

Cute Myspace Generators

Friday, June 27, 2014

Animate - The mysterious door

last week we wrote a story about a little white door (this is what the picture looks like) then we had to  show it but it had to be animated.

My story is about a little girl come home from school. She noticed a little door. Next to the door was a potion and she drinks it. Then she shrinks. Then she realise that she can fit in the door now, so she goes in. It was pitch black and after that it was a mystery. She was never to be seen again. 

Next time I think I should use more descriptive words.

I think I did good no my animated story.   



WALT
add detail to our creative writing to make it interesting to our reader

Thursday, June 26, 2014

Matariki


This week week did some work with Mr Jay we did presentations about mataariki the whole class did a presentation but I did a prezi. I think I need to add a bit more information.

Friday, June 13, 2014

Nga Kupu o te wiki

Nearly ever week we have a red box and if you get caught say the kupu of the week you get a red caught be good and that go into the red box and on Friday at assembly 3 names get drawed out of the box and they spin the wheel of fortune and they win a prize
next time I need to change the colour of the text

here is the kupu of the week

100 word challenge

Tootoo “hurry up” someone yelled from a far. “man this is taking ages” I sobbed in the hot stuffy car. suddenly the cop came past I was terrified and i’m pretty sure  you would be too. He stopped at the window and Mum took a deep breath in and the cop stood there “ Ma'am I think you have to leave, the construction worker’s are working on a building and the water pipe has bursted and it’s blocked off sorry” he said in grief. “ohhh” Mum breathed out she was so glad she didn't do anything wrong.  So we took off home in a big rush and we were so disappointed that we couldn’t get some Mcdonalds 

My class has entered a competition called the 100 word challenge and you write a story based on a photo and here's mine 

Friday, June 6, 2014

Success Recount





TASK -
You are going to write a descriptive recount, telling our audience about a time you were successful.  Don’t forget you need to…
  • put things in order
  • use describing words
  • give lots of detail to paint a picture in the readers head
  • start with something that was said or thought
  • use powerful verbs
WALT
Describe a time we were successful



“Woohoo we're finally here… Lonsdale park” I screamed “ I've always  wanted to go here”.   I went to my dorm skipping as happy as could be, I unpack my luggage with a huge grin on my face I made my bed and I boosted it to the hall.  We had briefing and went over all the rules and we introduce our self and then the fun began.  


To get the ball rolling Cathy my division manager announced “ this weekend we are making . . . poppet “  all the cadets cheer with excitement  “our poppets are based on what is important to me” Cathy announced, straight away I had a idea . . . Miss money blond curly hair, money tucks, gold top hat and gold eye’s. The next day I put my blood sweat and tears into making my poppet after all that hard efit it was all effit was finished and it looked just how I planned


The next day I put my uniform on as fast as the wind.  I boosted it into the hall we did parde  and after all of that it was time to receive our badge, I stood there tall and proud as handed me my badge.  I was so proud of myself because it was my first badge.


After all of that it was all over.  I packed all of my gear and waited for my ride.  I was proud of myself and I was exhausted. I was so overjoyed that it was over, at that point of time my ride was I picked up my luggage and I spent another hour in the car from Mitimiti to Kaikohe.  

The End . . .

Dvolover Moviemaker

we had to make a movie about the main thing in your school witch is hurt free and what might happen in school and what you can do to solve and what happen when you do.. here is my movie

Friday, May 30, 2014

Room 17's Assembly

On Wednesday my class room 17 had assembly we lodes of different we started of karakia and mihi
then to get the ball rolling we kicked of with Me and some
other girls.  with a punch of fun some boys and girls
did the bongos.  after that we did the normal thing like the wheel of fortune, yellow cards and red card
then we did house point and the best group won koura.  Ma Te Hira did her korero then we finshed
with karakia.                                                            

Friday, May 16, 2014

BIO POEM

we had to write a BIO poem about myself and here is mine... 

Waimarama  
SWAG, beautiful, cool
daughter of  Sarah and Brent and sister of Maria and Apirana
My eyes, My swag,
hanging out with my family,hang out with my friends, meeting with Ma Te Hira
heights, the dark, getting frites from my sibling  
being deputy head girl and being an ambassador
rid a dolphin
Kaikohe
Koura Is the BEST OUT OF ALL OF THEM

Friday, May 9, 2014

ANZAC March

WALT:recount an exciting event so that our reader knows what happened and how we felt.

“Get up Waimarama!” yelled mum “its time to march!”
"Give me five more minutes”  I replied in a sleepy voice.
"NO NOW!” Mum yelled in her grumpy voice.   Then I walked to my wardrobe like a hunched over old lady, I put my uniform on with my eyes half shut. I had a feed and off we went to the Kaikohe RSA.


A few minutes later we marched down to the memorial hall and then we had the dawn parade. I tell ya it was freezing.  After that I went to all these places In Northland with Air Training Corps (ATC) 25 squadron.  It was so fun, I enjoyed it because I tried something new and I really want to do it again


Then the day was all over and the sky was turning dark blue. I felt hot and sticky at that time I was half asleep we went to the unit then we had a meeting . I was pleased that it was all over “ whoo I can go home now“ I screamed with cheer.

I finally arrived at home I walk as slow as a snail I dropped on my bed like a sloth and straight away I was asleep. Mum yelled out I her soft tone “sweet dreams”.




Wednesday, April 16, 2014

Learning Reflection


In class time today we had to a reflection of the term and here mine...

...What was your best moment in term one? Why?
The best moment in term 1 is when I found  out that I was an ambassador. I never thought that I had or have the skills to be one.
What was the most important thing you learnt?
The most important thing I learnt  was art. The best type of area of art was blending

What subject do you do the best in this term and why?
The best subject I liked this term was art I enjoy drawing things. I like doing it by myself Because it calms me down and it’s nice and quiet.  
What subject did you not do so well in and why?.
The subject I think I need to work on is my te reo maori. need to work on confidence and pronounce it properly  
Did I manage my time wisely this term? How? e.g. finishing most tasks, working independently.
I think I did manage my time . I have finish most of my task . and I do work independently sometimes

What can I do differently next term to improve? Why?
I think that I don’t really need to improve on anything. I am up to date with my work and I manage my time well and I work independently.     (sometimes)

Give yourself smiley faces out of 10 to show how well you have done this term:

8...☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
/10   n

    By Waimarama

Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Just kidding-Panui


Just kidding
WALT: right a summarise on the "just kidding" and record our voice on audioboo
In Panui / reading we have been   doing Summarising on a book call "just kidding" then we recorded our sammarises on audioboo...
I like doing audioboo it makes doing your work faster and really easier and next time I need to speak louder
and here is mine...



Monday, April 14, 2014

My Whakapapa

Nearly all term we as in room 17 have been learning how to resite Whakapapa it loud and clearly and here is

Monday, April 7, 2014

compensation problem video

compensation problem video
Last week we had a problem to do with compensation we spent days learning how to solve it and create a video to explain how to solve it...( kirihira and Kara and I/Waimarama)
What we should do next time...
next time I think we should show it on something ales like on a white board because it hard to read on the Chromebook

Compensation Adding from Room 17 on Vimeo.

Thursday, April 3, 2014

St John's

for about 4 month I have been going to...
Inline images 4
Inline images 6Inline images 5last week I got given my uniform
I have been enjoy (I tell you it's really fun)
we are working on and I have just finished
community serves badge
and in the weekend we went to a camp and we finished your arts badge
here are some picture of the St Johns logo

and Me in uniform...   

The important thing about Family


WALT add detail to our writing to make its more interesting
Success Criteria - Have you remembered to
add 3 really great details
use describing words (adjectives)
start sentences with capital letters and end with full stops
re-read it to make sure it makes sense!


The most important thing about family

is that they’re always there for you

and they're kind and loving

and you can always count on them

and they always fill your heart with joy

But the most important thing about family

is that they’re always there for you.